Blood-Stained Tears Poem by Amy Fifita

Blood-Stained Tears

Rating: 5.0


Crying of blood not of tears,
Just let it out.
Blood is spilt, but no one’s dead,
This is your cry.
Pain releasing, anger lost,
You have now expressed,
The day ends.

Dreamless nights, dream-full nights,
It doesn’t change life’s ways.
Nights of nightmares, others none,
It’s just like life.
Tosses and turns, peaceful slumbers,
You’ll soon wake up,
Another day awakens.

The day is fresh, but will soon stale,
As does life’s happiness.
Maybe not for you, but for someone,
The reason for your outlook.
Totally logical, but also illogical,
Life has its miracles, but also tragedies,
Life will go on.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Naseer Ahmed Nasir 28 December 2008

Yes Amy, life will go on with all its joys and tragedies.....So you keep on writing your dreams and poetizing your tears but never loose hope and always look at brighter side of life as well, you will feel good!

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I like how you balanced the poem out... Imma rate it..

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Lalitha iyer 23 February 2009

Dear frieng, again the poem gushes out the tormenting picture of life and so cruel are the words that they strike me straight and i am down.

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Tango 22 February 2009

An excellent poem on life, and it ebbs, and flows. Very well put. Tango.

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Leah Wright 20 February 2009

This is my favourite poem out of all of your poems because they are very deep and beautiful! ! ! ! And touching it kindas makes me feel real weird and happy! wel done 10++++

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Kesav Easwaran 15 January 2009

'Dreamless nights, dream-full nights, It doesn’t change life’s ways. Nights of nightmares, others none, It’s just like life'... very good lines these...a beautiful write... concept practical and down to earth...10

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Aijaz Asif 14 January 2009

my, my, my...bravo bravo...while reading this marvellous write I felt the up's and down's of emotions, a very rare and powerfull style of write which is my style too thats why i loved this poem and I'm glad that you ask me to read it,10++++ and A++++ rgds asif

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