Moonlit waterfall
In an orange orchard-
Though a slim stream now,
Your beauty is still flowing freely!
I like this. Even though there are few words in your poem I somehow get an image of california orchards at midnight. You paint a picture well.
I like it. Moonlit waterfall...very nice. That alone paints a picture in my mind. I love the moon and well all of nature so that combo made my day.
This conjures a beautiful picture in the mind of beauty that is neverending!
Nice use of alliteration, it really works to link the poem together. I also like the image of the color orange against the moonlit sky.
fantastic what a vast space for my heart and mind thanks god bless u
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Wow so amazing! Well writen though short but I'd like to have it on audio. Thanks.