Brand New Poem by Linda Moore

Brand New

Rating: 5.0


Pitched to and fro, yes knocked about
Sorrow sucks Life out
Releasing pain, a time to cry
River of tears run to a desert dry

Clear blue the sky in a barren land
Begin at the beginning, a new plan
Escape from the tattered and torn
Anew and reborn

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Moushumi moushumi 16 November 2008

A real transcended thought captured in your poem. keep sharing. its already in my fav list.10***

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Kesav Easwaran 15 November 2008

born again on perfect blue...poem expressive, suggestive and indicative...well done, Linda 10

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Rinzu Susan Rajan 15 November 2008

THAT WAS BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN AND REALISTIC TO THE CORE... GREAT ATTEMPT TO TRANSCEND THE BOUNDARIES OF THE OLD AND TATTERED AND DISCOVER SOMETHING NEW...

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Sarwar Chowdhury 09 November 2008

Fine! As verses travelled within the reality. chosen words are beautiful....10++++

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