Breaking Poem by Sankar Sarkar

Breaking

Rating: 4.9


Breaking! Breaking! Breaking!
Day and night we are breaking,
We are breaking like ice, like soil
Like sand and like tears!
We are breaking while working
Talking, thinking and loving
We are dreaming through breaking
And breaking through dreaming,
As fountain falls dancing down
And river flows murmuring
Through eroding and creating

Nothing is static anywhere
Everything in universe is on changing
Through breaking and breaking
Both in thing and being
All is breaking into atoms and molecules
Beyond which we are nothing but breaking

You are changing
He and she is changing,
I am changing like light and dark
Through breaking of life and death;
We are growing through breaking
And breaking amid growing,
Yet we are everlasting in concept
Through breaking into loving;
Breaking is so called death
And death is breaking
Both usher in the living and loving
Through mystic conceiving

Revolution of the new
And evolution of the present
Getting life breaking the old,
Life is constructive in breaking
Mind is creative and soul productive
Eternally we are breaking
Through sprouting the seeds of eternity
Worldly we are passive but concrete
In realizing .
Every feeling relating to life and world
Concrete and abstract turned into
The shape of wholeness in breaking;

Breaking is the source of creation
And creation resulted from breaking,
Universe seems diverse in breaking,
Ins and outs, parts and particles,
Body and mind are on breaking
To make themselves eternal

No relation is related
Without breaking,
No concept is concrete
Without breaking,
No life is lively and explanative
Without breaking,
Breaking begets life,
Composition, creation, compassion
And universalizing in breath
Through breaking and breaking

Breaking is the cadence of universe
Mentally or physically
Externally and internally
Covertly or overtly
All is through breaking,
Nothing is beyond breaking here
Both unique and wholeness
Is in the meaning of breaking,
As long as breaking exists,
The concept of totality is in rhythm;

Even relation is related to
The relevance of cosmos,
Intensity of diversity in mode of instant
Makes the thought of oneness
For ever breaking;
Breaking causes life
Breaking causes death
Yet breaking greets countless possibilities
through impossibilities
and stark land of mankind on this earth,
and keeps creation moving ever
amid toiling, tilling and loving

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Sunday, July 2, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: life and death
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajnish Manga 02 July 2017

The poem is clear on one thing- the making and breaking is an integral part of the creation at personal and universal level. Highly philosophical musings amazingly presented. Thanks. All is breaking into atoms and molecules Beyond which we are nothing but breaking Breaking is the source of creation

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Kumarmani Mahakul 03 July 2017

Breaking is going on either in covert or in overt is true as death is.Dear Sankar, you have penned in touchingly and nicely. It is your pen I like to open here... Breaking is the cadence of universe Mentally or physically Externally and internally Covertly or overtly All is through breaking, .. thanks a lot.10

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Anil Kumar Panda 03 July 2017

This is the process how this universe has come into existence. Breaking and making is the process too with human emotions. with sweet wordplay you have given a true color to the reality. Thanks for sharing.10+++

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Jazib Kamalvi 03 July 2017

Write comment. Wow! A great science fiction and philosophical write. Thanks

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Cheryl Tutaan 04 July 2017

Such an amazing work! A big 10! Thanks,

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Elizabeth Padillo Olesen 04 October 2017

Dear Sarkar, I find this a very powerful poem on a very powerful subject. Beautifully written. I do like the idea of breaking as the constant act of changing in life and life situations on earth. Very beautiful subject and good ending. Thanks for sharing. Sorry it is only now I am able to respond.

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Prayad Brian Pantasri 09 July 2017

The poem of Breaking remind me to think about breaking the massive universe into a smaller particle until nothing else left to break! Perhaps, Emptiness is the consequence of breaking endlessly. Thank you for sharing. Cheers.

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Bri Edwards 06 July 2017

For ever breaking; ..............i suggest: Forever i did NOT dislike the poem, but my mind does not concern itself with such things, and i won't claim to understand all this breaking etc. etc. Ragnish refers to this poem as Highly philosophical musings. perhaps that is a good 'easy' description of it? i think i'm more down to earth****. thanks for sharing. **** THIS IS not EXACTLY WHAT I MEAN BY down to earth: from online: The definition of down to earth is someone or something that is free of pretension and doesn't put on airs, but who is instead simple and straight-forward. An example of down to earth is a person who buys a nice cozy farmhouse instead of a giant mansion. Let's just say i don't philosophize. i eat, drink, and sleep. bri :)

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Ronell Warren Alman 05 July 2017

Superb poem written here. Simply wonderful.

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Bri Edwards 05 July 2017

i'm not quite done reading this, but i have to go now. i plan to return another day, even though i feel i'm breaking down......................completely! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! now my parts are flowing over the floor, towards the door. bri :)

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