Bri's World Without Love...... [ Subject Suggested By P H Member ‘prayad - Brian Pantasri'; Very Short; Supposing …..] Poem by Bri Edwards

Bri's World Without Love...... [ Subject Suggested By P H Member ‘prayad - Brian Pantasri'; Very Short; Supposing …..]



In a ‘World without love',
There'd be …NO love poems.
There'd be ……..NO God above.

BUT Bri does NOT care ……..for Either.
He just [ once in a while ] wants.…a Breather.
He ‘needs' a break from chores and.…Other Things!
What Bri REALLY NEEDS is ….Ice cream, Pizza, and Wings! !

(January 6th, 2017)

Friday, January 6, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: food,humorous,love and life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Brian said to me in a message:

'....I'd like to see some humour style from you in a title like..what happen if the world without Love..
or a human society with No Love...something like that.'

i 'reluctantly' responded to 'his call'. :)))

bri ;)
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Annette Aitken 18 January 2017

In Bri's world what would happen if there was a world without ice-cream and pizza. On the other hand there are pockets of the world where there is no love, its where war lives.

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Kanniappan Kanniappan 10 January 2017

In a ‘World without love', There’d be no moon, twilight and movies to sing duet songs! There'd be no poets, no love poems and group dances; There'd be no God above to grace the men and women; The boys and girls don’t take bath and dress up well! No more acid throwing on the girls who refuse to love; No more killing of the beautiful girls with all sorts of weapons!

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Prayad Brian Pantasri 17 February 2017

There'd be no cosmic system, no items mentioned above; No more fairy tales, no anything else like unicorn; There'd be no you and me, neither soul nor ions; Oh! nothing regrettable than kindly compassionate is disturbed. Thank you so much Bri for replying to my request, and sharing your lovely poems.

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