Bring Back Those Lost Moments Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Bring Back Those Lost Moments

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Bring me back those tears
I shall spread them in the garden of past
To grow flower of happiness
With the fragrance of lost touch
Lost moments and fallen time..

Birds that flew away to far land
Will fly back with same grace
With same tweet and notes
Which they left half sung.

Stars that attended the call of the earth
rushed to meet the dust of the gravity
will see the galaxy from ground
Of which they were part, sometime back.

Moon that reminded the eternal love
Between earth and him
will narrate the story of revolving love
Where they met and disappeared in cosmic union

I know time will not return at any cost
But those recorded moments may bring back
Happy faces which got faded in e-life around
The jewels of meeting replaced by SMS and calls.

Wednesday, September 30, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love,memories
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Seema Jayaraman 01 October 2015

A very profound poem..loved two paras exceptional..Bring me back those tears I shall spread them in the garden of past and Stars that attended the call of the earth rushed to meet the dust of the gravity will see the galaxy from ground Of which they were part, sometime back. thanks for sharing

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Akhtar Jawad 30 September 2015

Tears are followed by the flowers of happiness. And flowers are followed by the pearls of tears. The cycle of happiness and tears nicely painted in the poem.......................................10

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Poetic Sky 23 September 2020

Very difficult to bring back but one can live in hose moments through memory.

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 01 October 2015

Verily, the modern communication system has influenced our life emotionally.

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T Rajan Evol 01 October 2015

And will never return, what is gone is gone forever leaving the footprints behind. We are lucky to have seen the glorious past as well as e-future. Nice poem overall, Asim. God bless you.

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Sanjukta Nag 01 October 2015

consequences of modern civilization... Happy faces which got faded in e-life around The jewels of meeting replaced by SMS and calls. nicely assembled. so well knitted and well written.

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Edward Kofi Louis 01 October 2015

The story of revolving love. With the muse of past memories; but, with hope ahead of mankind. Nice work

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