M. Asim Nehal

Gold Star - 164,655 Points (26th April / Nagpur)

Buried Letters - Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Several love letters
written to you
are buried in my heart
And I am carrying them
With me as a souvenir
To cherish till last breath
I know you must have
Preserved them in some
Undisclosed or unreachable
Destination or place
And occasionally
Must be going through them
Under the clouds
of fear and ecstasy
the buried secrets
may ruin your present
hence you should
release them to the sky
like pigeon or kite
or spread them
in the dust like
burned ashes
the sky will accommodate
them with stars in galaxy
or the earth will hand them
to the winds to spread them
as fragrance
these buried letters will
find a suitable place in our
tomb of past to rest in peace.

Topic(s) of this poem: letters, life, pablo neruda, remembrance

Form: Free Verse


Comments about Buried Letters by M. Asim Nehal

  • Edward Kofi Louis (1/30/2016 5:06:00 AM)


    Love! The fragrance of the heart. Nice work. (Report) Reply

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  • Nosheen Irfan (1/23/2016 12:42:00 AM)


    Amazing, amazing, amazing...these buried letters will find a suitable place in our tomb of past to rest in peace...a lovely ending to a very emotive poem. Deserves much much more than 10. (Report) Reply

  • Kelly Kurt (1/22/2016 12:52:00 PM)


    Many of us have written such letters, often to more than just one person. The metaphorical messages are stored in heart and memory and can be read at any time (Report) Reply

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (1/22/2016 12:01:00 PM)


    This is very amazing to have many buried love letters under warmness of emotional heart. Sky accommodates the stars and galaxy with emotional love. Very interesting drafting shared on with reality. Nice sharing done definitely.10 (Report) Reply

  • Abhilasha Bhatt (1/22/2016 11:51:00 AM)


    Buried letters are just like buried memories and emotions....they recall themselves at each and every turn of life...lovely poem...loved it...thank you for sharing :) (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, January 22, 2016



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