Bri Edwards

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Bringing Back Memories Of... .....[humor; Eating; Very Short; For Jak Black, Ph Friend] - Poem by Bri Edwards

When at my mirrored-belly I look,
I remember what my wife does cook.
Or should I have said “does bake”?
Like each pie, croissant, and cake!

I used to be a slim, handsome guy,
but the “slim” part gave in ….to pie.
I’m still quite handsome. Goodness sake.
Pass me another slice ………of that cake!

(March 20, 2015)

Topic(s) of this poem: food

Poet's Notes about The Poem

my PH friend, Jak Black, an obvious pseudonym if i ever heard one, challenged me to write about what would bring a memory back to me. what else would i rather remember?

Comments about Bringing Back Memories Of... .....[humor; Eating; Very Short; For Jak Black, Ph Friend] by Bri Edwards

  • Savita Tyagi (3/24/2015 5:30:00 PM)

    What could be better than fresh pie or cake. I would rather remember those good old days of my home made goodies! (Report) Reply

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  • Diane Hine (3/23/2015 5:08:00 AM)

    For cake's sake, pie guy, you forgot to rhyme croissant (restaurant?) . Pretty good anyway. (Report) Reply

  • (3/22/2015 9:13:00 AM)

    You're not eating enough of that humble pie, you handsome chap.
    Thanks for taking up the challenge. Ha ha. Was expecting something a little more sensitive/sentimental than your hankering for food. That's love I suppose. Enjoyed the humour Bri.
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Poem Submitted: Friday, March 20, 2015

Poem Edited: Friday, March 20, 2015

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