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Bringing You Closer

Rating: 4.9

The taste is there
Love biting
Constricting
My throat
Inhibiting my brain
As I look for words
To explain
To paint a
Simple picture
While

Roiling emotions
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Ahmad Shiddiqi 25 November 2008

fullness in simplicity! very well done! keep writing!

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Reshma Ramesh 19 September 2008

woah! ! beautiful...........

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Ashraful Musaddeq 17 September 2008

'Love is magic A sense within us Beyond mere Description' So beautiful these lines are, so true, love it. Excellent composition.10++

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Ershad Mazumder 16 September 2008

No words to say You know better than me What do I want to say I know better than you What do you want to say. Let this time pass in silence Let there be a timelessness.

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Tj Becker 16 September 2008

I find love the hardest to write about. Words seem lame in comparison to what it feels like to love someone. But you did an excellent job, the emotions you planted like seeds in your poem have bloomed into a garden of love. Very good use of your words.

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 21 September 2009

let nature fulfill us...what lovely closing lines to end this beautiful poem on love....10

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Dr.subhendu Kar 03 September 2009

Tears mount my rims Each droplet falls on Blushing cheeks No words will come Yet a volume of love.............. .yet the flow of rhythm starts consuming thrumming the core half backed bone................oh wonderful expression of love in resilience, passionate write by imagery yet of unique genre,10++++, thanks for sharing

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Sarwar Chowdhury 03 September 2009

Love is magic A sense within us Beyond mere Description Tears mount my rims Each droplet falls on Blushing cheeks No words will come A to z--> astonishingly captured this reader! beautiful free form with amazing flow! verses are emitted by you dear carol a truely poetic heart! 10+

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Alison Cassidy 21 December 2008

The short, rather abrupt lines work well to emphasize the short breaths of one overwhelmed by the urgency of desire and passion underpinning first love. Many writers would spoil the narrative by over-writing, but your rather concise style allows you to capture the ecstatic very powerfully. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Meggie Gultiano 13 December 2008

wonderful..this is nice.Love it

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