Brittle Fidelity Poem by Rehan Hyder

Brittle Fidelity

Rating: 4.4


When indigo fingers of dusk
had stretched them
over last of the coy sunbeams
Creaked a granite
relationship
Under the clumsy boots of fidelity

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A clever piece from which the reader will take what s/he will. t x

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Michael Pruchnicki 19 February 2008

Rehan - Some good imagery here! 'indigo fingers of dusk' 'coy sunbeams' 'clumsy boots of fidelity'

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