Butterfly Poem by _____________________________________ -

Butterfly

Rating: 4.7


Feel like a butterfly; mostly
half finished
still clinging to the
umbilical cord of the Palette
replaced
before drying

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 27 October 2008

Ocassional doubt, and the mortal ellement of human insecurity....can result in making us better & stronger, in whatever our deficiencies be....There are a many strings attached to Life. Sometimes all we can do is hold-on tight to faith in God & ourselves...in that order.Great Penning, Rehan! -fjr-

0 0 Reply
Dr.Wardha Jawdat 29 October 2008

ahhhh..classic rehan...excellent

0 0 Reply
Anjali Sinha 03 November 2008

small but so cute nice write ++10 anju (do read and comment on mine)

0 0 Reply
Sathyanarayana M V S 05 November 2008

This kind of small poems with some flash it them appeal to me most....very good.10

0 0 Reply
Aijaz Asif 07 November 2008

unth(superb) write, in few words everything is described....i loved it thanks 10++++ for this remarkable write rgds asif

0 0 Reply
Kasia Fedyk 24 May 2012

Wow, I am floating on a palettes vibrant colors where a butterfly left behind, I touch it once and I become whole. Superb!

0 0 Reply
Rachel Butler 28 October 2009

'Feel like a butterfly' Rachel Ann Butler

0 0 Reply
Philosophy of a DewyFlower 04 September 2009

is significant your Butterfly.

0 0 Reply

sweetttttttttttttttttttttttt

0 0 Reply
Marieta Maglas 27 May 2009

A metamorphosis, which is not complete with the color effect in aesthetics of poetry. Here is a wonderful picture in the lyrics.10++

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success