Doom and Gloom

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Broken - Poem by Doom and Gloom

There was a time when I was whole, in body, mind, heart & soul
When I was flawless without seam, a fairy tale a perfect dream
A single piece with no divide, with faith, hope & love inside
Complete, entire & intact. All I need, nothing lacked
Then I met you
Now I find that I am shattered, broken bruised and badly battered
Cut asunder callously, by your fair hand so savagely
Smashed and torn totality ceases
Left abandoned in a million pieces


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  • (9/29/2007 1:49:00 AM)

    WELL WRITTEN... YOU MADE ME RELIVE WHAT ONCE WAS, BUT THIS TIME AROUND I LAUGHED INSTEAD OF CRY; -) (Report)Reply

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  • (9/14/2007 3:42:00 AM)

    Ouch! I know this feeling well DG! I hope you find solace in the muse at least, I did and do. Smiling at you, Tai Aciiiiids friend (Report)Reply

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  • (8/8/2007 4:11:00 PM)

    thanks for the emotion! ! ..felt it! ! ..excellent write! ! (Report)Reply

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  • (6/29/2007 10:09:00 PM)

    Wow! Indeed the pain inflicted by another is a deep one. Very good write. (Report)Reply

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  • (6/11/2007 3:07:00 AM)

    Nice. Dude, what ever happened to you? (Report)Reply

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  • (6/4/2007 2:47:00 PM)

    Well written! Loved it- Beau Golden (Report)Reply

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  • (5/24/2007 10:41:00 AM)

    i feel ur pain more than evr. amanda :) (Report)Reply

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  • (5/19/2007 5:28:00 AM)

    oh! what a piece of poem....excellent man..... (Report)Reply

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  • (4/2/2007 12:58:00 AM)

    Amazing, it all flows together, makeing the perfect mind image. (Report)Reply

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  • john tiong chunghoo (3/31/2007 12:27:00 AM)

    wow, writing like a teenager first broken heart experience. (Report)Reply

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  • (3/21/2007 6:57:00 AM)

    Very powerfull. I like the way you use words in this poem. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, February 26, 2007

Poem Edited: Friday, April 8, 2011


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