Broken Poem by Jcson Jenuis

Broken

Rating: 5.0


I smiled trying, when love came crying,
In a pool of tears I tried finding,
Where the mud I fell in I tried washing,
Soaked still in the thoughts of past dirt,
A fall from height in hurt,
A Brut drink I seek for these thirst,
Whiles wine mocks this journey I trek,
A dry throat I feels on this desert,
As pain care a hoot to the eye,
A debris of a heart kept for the next eye,
Where skeptic seek the reality in sight,
Joy remains a threat on the empty streets,
As the next stroll I'm taking with fear treat.

Broken
Wednesday, May 2, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: broken heart
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 02 May 2018

Dear Jcson, such a good imagery poem...10++++

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Congrats, Jcson for being chosen for the day👍👍👍

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Lyn Paul 23 May 2018

Words read with interest with a great front cover of your book.

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Edward Kofi Louis 23 May 2018

Broken Heart! ! ! 'Whiles wine mocks this journey I trek'! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Tom Allport 23 May 2018

a poem of heartfelt suffering lines, Jcson live and learn to find better times? ..............well penned

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It reads even better the second time. Super sentences of sadness but with a powerful potential for redemption!

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Broken indeed! Well worded and thoughtfully titled is this compelling and captivating composition of emotional battlement and love and pain!

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Jcson Jenuis 26 May 2018

Thanks For all your congratulatory messages I really appreciate it

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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 May 2018

Congratulations! When love comes crying tear falls down and this provokes thought. This poem is very amazingly penned that carries emotion. A brilliant poem is shared. This is a perfect poem of the day...10

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Akhtar Jawad 23 May 2018

A broken heart so nicely painted, congrats!

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