Broken Heart Poem by Aqua Flower

Broken Heart

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My aching heart
still shaken by my own words
that we should part
because continuing like this hurts
for it isn't enough
for my loving soul
it isn't enough
to only hear words that console
I need your loving touch
I need your presence so much
you want me for you own
yet I often am alone
wanting more of your time
and tolerance I can no longer find
and even though I plea
for us to break apart
deep down is my biggest fear
there will be no mending to my broken heart

Copyright @ Aqua Flower

Wednesday, July 25, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: breaking up,love and loss
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Carl Roussell 26 July 2018

Facing a failed love is painful and expressed so well in the lines: still shaken by my own words that we should part

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Aqua Flower 26 July 2018

Sometimes being alone is better than being unfulfilled. Thank you for replying.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 26 July 2018

Such a well expressed poem...10++++

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Aqua Flower 26 July 2018

Thank you, Benard!

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Robert Murray Smith 25 July 2018

A well penned write of insight.++10

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Aqua Flower 26 July 2018

Thank you, Robert. Being in love is the best feeling, love that cannot be revived is the worst.

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Rini Shibu 25 July 2018

An heartfelt poem, well written

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Aqua Flower 26 July 2018

thank you Rini!

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