Sebastine Humaemo

Rookie - 0 Points (04-03-1985 / INDIA)

First Love... - Poem by Sebastine Humaemo

I still remember the first smile on your face
which gave my heart beat a sudden race
though I couldn't express my love to you
I will be there in your heart forever in you
Im not sure of getting another girl like you
but for sure I say...... will never forget you......


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  • (10/28/2009 6:00:00 AM)

    'I still remember the first smile on your face
    which gave my heart beat a sudden race'

    Rachel Ann Butler
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/17/2009 3:46:00 AM)

    I still remember the first smile on your face..... it is first sight love syndrome.. manyways to come across but beautiful expience in life.... good write...10 (Report)Reply

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  • (5/24/2009 7:16:00 AM)

    Yes first love is forever.good job. (Report)Reply

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  • (3/2/2009 5:13:00 PM)

    A wonderful piece sweetly written. 10 (Report)Reply

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  • (2/19/2009 10:58:00 PM)

    ......trully sweet piece.........................Winnie... (Report)Reply

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  • (12/23/2008 11:11:00 AM)

    heh...sounds perfect for first love! ! !
    Nia
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  • Miriam Maia Padua (12/15/2008 2:38:00 AM)

    short but compelling....full of love and compassion....if first ove is really unforgettable, then, so with your poetry......thanks for sharing all your amazing poems with us....poems worth to be cherished forever..... (Report)Reply

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  • (12/13/2008 5:23:00 PM)

    our first love is hard on our heart wen it goes.... but just remember the true friends are always there for us. this real good. good job.
    Crystal
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  • (12/11/2008 5:58:00 AM)

    I think our first love is something special and one never to be forgotten, nice write Sebastine,
    10
    Lynda xx
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  • (12/7/2008 8:00:00 AM)

    nicee! ! she z lucky..
    that she z not forgetten! !
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  • (11/12/2007 9:53:00 AM)

    memories and love are visceral, you capture both in this piece. writing is immortal, thus it is never forgotten. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, November 12, 2007

Poem Edited: Sunday, April 24, 2011


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