Broken Promises وعدہ جو وفا نہ ہو سکا Comments

Ek bahut hi peyari ghazal.................................

line 5: 'wht's' :) :) i THINK this has to do with a romance which failed to continue. hmm? it may be too much symbolism for me to handle; i'm NOT GOOD at recognizing/interpreting symbolic poems. in Wada Jo Wafa Na Ho Saka, i DO recognize meN and maiN and per and thee and ban and ho and Hum and.....well, that's all. : ( bri :)

Life could not touch my heart O' Love look at - my breath of life, my petals of life, my stalk of life, my veins of life, without merging with You I'm none and nothing in life.......... // great

Life could not touch my heart still living on a hope I shall go back with eyes for the blind skies Life you come with aroma bring a few colors with you So that I may say flowers spring in my ways..fascinating expression! Brilliantly penned! (10)

Life you come with aroma bring a few colors with you So that I may say flowers spring in my ways What was it just a promise that couldn't be fulfilled We both lost our ways on the long highways.......touching expression. Best poetic feelings. Nicely executed. Thanks.10

Promises break inflicting pain. Nicely done!