Busy-Bee >>> Poem by Manonton Dalan

Busy-Bee >>>

Rating: 5.0


her chest is talking to me
I look and look, enticing
she notice but doesn't care
she's too busy taking orders
she smiled, push it forward
that needs a tender loving

man behind me is looking too
enjoying every moves she does
got my order and fly like bee
I almost bump, into somebody
behind that big swinging door
I said sorry but didn't oblige

Thursday, January 21, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: eyes
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ratnakar Mandlik 21 January 2016

Observation of minute details and it's presentation are superb. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Manonton Dalan

Manonton Dalan

virginia, usa
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