Manonton Dalan

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Busy-Bee >>> - Poem by Manonton Dalan

her chest is talking to me
I look and look, enticing
she notice but doesn't care
she's too busy taking orders
she smiled, push it forward
that needs a tender loving

man behind me is looking too
enjoying every moves she does
got my order and fly like bee
I almost bump, into somebody
behind that big swinging door
I said sorry but didn't oblige

Topic(s) of this poem: eyes


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  • (1/21/2016 10:25:00 PM)


    Observation of minute details and it's presentation are superb. Thanks for sharing.10 points. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, January 21, 2016



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