But For You. Poem by Fay Slimm

But For You.

Rating: 5.0


My days would become
One shade darker.
The sun would be blue,
And, but for you
My eyes would not smile
When the raindrops
Of hurt leave puddles
Around my heart,
Which, but for you would
Deluge my soul.
The light of my life
You have become.
But for you my nights
Would be lonely
As graves, your saving
My 'sanity'
Brought normality.
Love never appeared,
Nor would, but for you.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Meggie Gultiano 28 April 2009

a ery beautiful emotional write

0 0 Reply
Sameer Ahmed 27 April 2009

The emptiness of soul has been described so vividly in this poem that it reflects a true charisma of love.....10/10

0 0 Reply
Juneil Sechico 27 April 2009

nice write Fay...this is dinner not just dessert...! very gentle and expressive! 10+

0 0 Reply
Fiona Davidson 26 April 2009

Beautiful write Fay...wonderful and gentle....Fi 10+++

0 0 Reply
Mel Vincent Basconcillo 26 April 2009

those u love and hu love u are truly special and loving..great write..u always are amazing! !

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

in Cornwall U.K.
Close
Error Success