(c) 27 (Life/Philosophy) Soul Water Poem by Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean

(c) 27 (Life/Philosophy) Soul Water

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You would be meandering by
Wasting your while
This world is not worth living under the sky
If you havnt tasted your soul water
Other delights will turn bitter
Open your inner eye
Feel the inner wind blowing
Inhale the fragrance
Listen to the sound of the water flowing
Become your own lover
Open the folds bit by bit
Use your innocence to see
Not your wordliness
That will make it flee
The soul water is pure
Crystal clear
Drink it
Drown in it
Anoint yourself with it

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Geoff Warden 18 September 2006

T>O> beautiful poem Your use of words eqisite

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Ruby Root 18 September 2006

Hi Tranquil, Beautiful Poem. I am sure what it all means but excellent write. Take care.

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Patricia Gale 18 September 2006

Splendid piece, fantastic advice. I humbly bow to the words that fall from your hands.

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Catastrophe King 18 September 2006

Use intelligence to write Some true appreciations That will make her glee The Tranquil Ocean is pure Crystal clear Applaud it Cherish in it Anoint herself with it

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Nalini Hebbar 18 September 2006

needed this piece of inspiration badly today...thanks...love...nalini

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