<≪≪cactus≫≫≫ Poem by VIPINS PUTHOORAN

<≪≪cactus≫≫≫

Rating: 2.5


Deep in my lonesome heart;
Of its forsaken desert
Growing a thorny swollen cactus,
Cannot be touched by your tactus.
"Come closer to its drought-
Alone, a heart with no doubt
To feel the spiny pains of this heart".

Sunday, November 13, 2011
Topic(s) of this poem: sad
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unwritten Soul 13 November 2011

So this is a reply for desert rose? hahahahaha....Vipins the poem just cool, not hot like desert. Cactus is awesome plant, with the waxy cuticles, it can storage water and used for people who need, lost in desert...Nothing in this world is useless...the spikes, just for protection..it wont harm you hahaha..Nice write Vipins, keep it up, stay bright! _Unwritten Soul

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(De Va) 15 November 2011

touching me as I read, you work keeps me thinking..such a good thing..blessings..

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Dave Walker 17 November 2011

Another great poem. A good write.

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Geetha Jayakumar 05 September 2013

Wow. Beautifully portrayed.Loved it.

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Wahab Abdul 12 May 2013

this is your famous poem.. well crafted, enjoyed, bro..

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Neela Nath Das 14 July 2012

The pricking pain is flowing throughout! Loved the words.

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Vijay Sai R 11 December 2011

nice words on a forbidden bush

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Iwrite Iam 18 November 2011

Lovely..and getting your thoughts across in so few lines.. Made me think...About the beauty and the beast..

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