! ! ! ! ! Can You Hear Me Knock...! ! ! ! ! Poem by Mamta Agarwal

! ! ! ! ! Can You Hear Me Knock...! ! ! ! !

Rating: 5.0


Can You hear me knock?
At night all the doors are locked.

I feel so lost, searching just, roam.
Been to every place called Your home.

Come on, my child, calm down,
You don’t look good when you frown.

I always want to see you smile,
Sit; breathe in and out for a while.

In silence alone, you will find
Within you I forever reside.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vidi Writes 13 April 2009

Wonderful Title... Catching my eyes. And the rest of the lines Straight sixer into my mind. Thank you.

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Rajkumar Mukherjee 13 April 2009

Dear Mamta, IT'S A GOOD SMALL POEM. YOU HAVE EXPRESSED YOUR MESSAGE WITH MINIMAL OF WORDS.NOW YOU CANNOT BE ALONE SINCE YOU REALISED SOMEONE RESIDES IN YOUR HEART. GOOD SPIRITUAL POEM.BUT HOW MANY OF US REALISE HIS PRESENCE? YOU DESERVES A10 FROM ME.--Rajkumar

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 12 April 2009

The divine always knocks.............but we hear his knock in silence only.............Good Write...............

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you never get lost don't youi..with such a one residing within you...10

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Heart-Warm rendering, Mamta...poignant, yet encapsuled in an ambiencer of soothe, and serenity......Happy Easter! FjR '09

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Rakesh Bedi 24 July 2009

Yes, mamta! THAT IS IT! ! !

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Sathyanarayana M V S 23 April 2009

A fabulous expression of love, deep from the heart.........wonderful

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 20 April 2009

u are spectacular and a prolific writer

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Kesav Easwaran 18 April 2009

good write, Mamta...revealing...enlightening...10

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premji premji 14 April 2009

mamtaji let me tell yo a story told bu osho. in oldentimes god was accessible to everybody... he was so fed up with people asking for this and that... so he thought of hiding somewhere... called some saints and asked their suggestions... one sage told: go and hide in moon... god said: americans will come there...hide under the sea.. no...divers will come there in search of treasure.... at last an old sage said: go and hide in the heart of your devotees...none will will search you there....god did exactly the same...your poem tells the same..............loved it...........

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