Cause I Can't See Inside Poem by Manonton Dalan

Cause I Can't See Inside

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I pass razor
between wood
and paint
I feel wind
blowing my
finger nails
to reveal what's
behind sheetrock
termite's house
but they left

I trace with my
finger; dried
I came late
wood eaten
I have to replace
to be hidden again
for sometime; maybe
some length of time

Monday, November 9, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: nature
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 09 November 2015

I feel wind blowing my finger nails...very amazing drafting shared here definitely. Wise and wonderful.

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Manonton Dalan

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virginia, usa
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