Manonton Dalan

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Cause I Can't See Inside - Poem by Manonton Dalan

I pass razor
between wood
and paint
I feel wind
blowing my
finger nails
to reveal what's
behind sheetrock
termite's house
but they left

I trace with my
finger; dried
I came late
wood eaten
I have to replace
to be hidden again
for sometime; maybe
some length of time

Topic(s) of this poem: nature

Comments about Cause I Can't See Inside by Manonton Dalan

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (11/9/2015 7:46:00 PM)

    I feel wind
    blowing my
    finger nails...very amazing drafting shared here definitely. Wise and wonderful.
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Poem Submitted: Monday, November 9, 2015

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