Ceaseless Pursuit Poem by Green Peace

Ceaseless Pursuit

Rating: 5.0

Ceaseless pursuit beyond the unknown
where its start, where destiny?
what its struggle really awaits?
Does it really fulfill the deep breathed desire?

To what extent and how much?
Anticipate greatly
But ends in emptiness weightlessness only
This insanity of mankind

Leads him perhaps nowhere
All attained pearls perished in the midway voyage somewhere
Thus O Man, O Youth, O Son acclimatise affirm to these few blessed blessings of love, forgiveness, mercy and cheer.

And progress ahead slowly, steadily, confidently as a king-
To attain something truly worthwhile
Who knows what tomorrow brings
Before much is lost in the melancholic pall in the long miles.

Kesav Easwaran 13 November 2008

a good poem...last stanza very well written...motivating write 10

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Sathyanarayana M V S 12 November 2008

A very good message giving poem. You earned all your votes in the last line itselt. But you may try to structure the poems for a better effect........10+++

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Seema Chowdhury 04 November 2008

the insenity of mankind leads them no where..... beautiful phrase. very thoughtful write.

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Aijaz Asif 04 November 2008

a thought provoking indeed, why to search for that which will be left behind...great write 10+

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 02 November 2008

The pursuit is worth an effort..............making a comeback to retain something amissed? ? ? perhaps worth a try! ! ! ! nice piece Garga! !

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