Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 414,023 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Change In Order - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

I at once thought world should change its order
It should look one on map without any border
Freedom movement without any restrictions
Free flow of human traffic without any frictions

It may spread message of love and peace
This is golden opportunity we should not miss
It must strike to all that it is necessity and must
We should take lead start at once and be the first

Well these are simple thoughts and may not look real
From the face of it they may look worthy and ideal
How much can we do remove the plight or ordeal?
Can we not act as honest broker and strike a deal?

It may not find favor with many across the world
The response may be lukewarm or very cold
It is possible that they may not try to come in fold
It needs chance to realize with initiatives very bold

I am not here to advocate any principle or ideology
It is not simple out cry, alarm, propaganda or bogey
When world is driven by powerful lobby and money?
They need power blocks, powerful alliances and company

It can be ruled out at the outset or from the beginning
It may not even have good start or find good opening
Age old rivalries have taken a deep root with distrust
It is formidable ask to come out with mutual trust

It may disappear with passage of time and find solution
It doesn’t require and great change with bloody revolution
It also doesn’t require power dissipation or devolution
It needs preparedness or acceptance in mind with formulation

I am not sure of its reasonability or correctness
It may look good piece of writing with neatness
Still it seems that it should given fair chance or trial
No one from heart may disagree or offer denial

Everybody wants to live in peace with harmony
They may be living uncomfortably at odds with so many
It is desire from their heart that they should come in terms
To do away with all misconceptions which prove as germs?


You may not be great visionary and being your own drums
You may look idealist with blend of thoughts and good dreams
It may prove as driving force to come round with favor
Fragrance of love and peace may find place with flavor

I shall consider my self deem fit to be called a true son
If I can perform well with time and act as good person
It I change every time for needs without any strong reason
Nature too may feel shame if they shower or show up without season


Comments about Change In Order by Hasmukh Amathalal

  • (2/13/2010 1:32:00 AM)


    this poem could obviously be read as post-colonial, very interesting. (Report) Reply

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  • Louis Rams (2/10/2010 8:53:00 PM)


    change is one of the hardest things in life, but as they say change is the only way.
    very good write a double ten
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  • Adam Reed (2/8/2010 8:30:00 PM)


    i found it interesting to say the least. nice to read something a little more philisophical. good work bro peace =) (Report) Reply

  • Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar (2/7/2010 10:24:00 AM)


    a noble notion ably put across. marks 10 shan (Report) Reply

  • Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (2/2/2010 4:12:00 PM)


    Excellently expressed my friend. A profound philosophy.10/10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, January 31, 2010



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