Chariot Of Love In Sky Poem by Rini Shibu

Chariot Of Love In Sky

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He came to me in my dreams
When whole world was asleep
He took me on the white chariot
The horse like snow ball
Moved in rippling waves of the clouds
He was the wind and I, the chime
When the wind swirled around the bells
Together we played sweet music of love
And like smoke billowed in the sky

Monday, August 28, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: cloud,dream,love,sky
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Richard Beevor 24 October 2017

So much beauty in your sweet verse, wonderful Rini

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Rini Shibu 24 October 2017

Thanks Richard, glad that you visited this poem

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Rini Shibu 24 October 2017

Thank you so much Richard for your comments Rini

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Edward Kofi Louis 09 September 2017

Art! ! Dream of love. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Rini Shibu 12 September 2017

Thanks Edward Rini...

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Dev Anand 29 August 2017

He was the wind and I, the chime When the wind swirled around the bells..ohhhh this was a pleasant surprise for me...... such an imagination and romance in the sky, chiming, white horses and the chariot. the wind the lover............. great romantic poem..

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Rini Shibu 29 August 2017

Thank you so much for your lovely comments Dev...

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Kumarmani Mahakul 28 August 2017

A love poem with beautiful collocation has been nicely shared. Thanks.

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Rini Shibu 28 August 2017

Thanks Kumar..

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Messaoud Allalouche 28 August 2017

very cool poem too I like it

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