Child Poem by Rebecca Navarre

Child

Rating: 5.0


A pony tail and a braid. A
butterfly in her hair, as she
plays. A half smile up, a half
smile down. She don't know she
could, turn the world around.

Saturday, September 1, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: child,heart
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 28 September 2018

Lovely, great imagery and fantastic poem.10

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Rebecca Navarre 29 September 2018

Thank you! .. Mohammed, For such a beautifully kind reply! .. Your poetry holds images of deep heart, that draw the reader in and make them feel a part! .. Thank you! .. Ever so many blessings! ..

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james watkin 01 September 2018

I like this. Adore innocence.

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Susan Williams 01 September 2018

It is hard to peg what a little girl is in a few words- -but you caught her essence! Well-done, my friend! . 10++++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 26 September 2018

Dear Susan, Thank You! .. For such a beautifully kind reply! .. The heart in your poetry ever so beautifully shines, with depth, love and beauty ever so kind! .. :) You are a light in the darkness here, to all, dear friend! .. :) Thank you! .. God bless, always! .. :)

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Susan Williams 24 September 2018

It's not hard to write kind comments about your lovely poetry! ! ! ! ! God has blessed us with your presence here on PH, my friend! ! ! !

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Rebecca Navarre 03 September 2018

Thank you! .. Susan, For such a beautifully kind comment! .. Your poetry so beautifully flows with words of heart and beauty, that touches the soul! .. God bless! . My friend :)

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