Channel Poem by Rebecca Navarre

Channel

Rating: 5.0


See the river channel bright...
With the waves in the moonlight...
Echoing back the sounds of
time... And life... As the fog
rolls, , , , across the night...

Tuesday, May 16, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: nature,night,spiritual
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Williams 22 May 2017

Seamus says it so well below. You have the capacity to pass visions on to your readers- -this is a God-given talent, my dear. And it gives your writings a touch of haunting mystery and come-hitherness to them. 10+++++++++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 23 May 2017

Thank You! ! ! Susan, You Are Very Kind! ! ! ! ! Your Poetry Ever So, Beautifully Shines. Readers Melt, And Hearts Beat In Time. To Your Every Rhyme. Thank You Again! ! ! ! ! Many Blessings! ! ! ! ! Prayers! ! ! ! !

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Seamus O Brian 16 May 2017

I can see it, almost a dream. A lonely foghorn echoing with the sound of time and life. A beautifully rendered vision, Rebecca. Bravo! ;) S

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Rebecca Navarre 18 May 2017

Thank You! ! ! Seamus, For Such A Kind And Thoughtful Reply! ! ! ! ! Your Poetry Is So Beautifully Powerful! ! ! ! ! Many Blessings! ! ! ! ! Many Smiles! ! ! ! ! :)

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