Child Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal


Rating: 4.9

Hello lovely kid,
You may always lead,
May you become head,
Books more you read,

You are always future,
Ideas good you nurture,
Learn always you best,
And pass the entire test,

When you are child,
Some times get wild,
Lessons make you mild,
More friends you find,

When you enter school,
Remain you always cool
No one can tell you fool,
Ideas may you have full,

Pick up here you more,
Try to form a core,
Never had you seen before,
Fun you get galore,

Here is holy place,
Challenge you may face,
Accept it with grace,
Love and more embrace,

Try and learn more,
Content not with less,
Steep may be ladder,
Path may be harder,

Neither get afraid,
Not you get laid,
Obey what is said,
More attention paid,

You always look forward,
And not fall backward,
Body soul you purge,
Look ahead and surge

Ratna Patel 12 August 2009

child is considered as love symbol....10

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Chetna Purohit 14 August 2009

future of our country as well...10

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Ashley Paul 15 August 2009

child is star attraction infamily....10

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worthy advices Daddy! ! ! the early years remain the best period... I enjoyed it...

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 28 October 2009

Must be walled in Nursery School. Ten++ for teaching child conduct... Sir. Ms. Nivedita UK Cordially invite to read and comment on Lingerie-IG* Enigmatic Navel or other poems niv

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Dr Dillip K Swain 08 March 2021

Yes sir, I totally agree with you! A value laden piece of work!

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Madathil Rajendran Nair 21 April 2015

A very sincere poem written in childlike innocence.

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A. Madhavan 21 April 2015

Pl. respect grammar.

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Kelly Kurt 21 April 2015

You have very good, very wise thoughts, Hasmukh. As a native English speaker, I would suggest not trying too hard to force rhymes though. Your thoughts and feelings stand well enough on their own. Thank you for sharing your poem, Sir. Peace.

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Darlene Styles 22 May 2010

really good write! ! i enjoyed reading it :)

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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