Child Predators Poem by louis rams

Child Predators

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whats going on in this world today.
another child taken
peoples lives are shaken.

blood of children spilled
this is not GODS will.

we are living in a society where children
can't be free, to run and play.
as they did before.
to return to their home nevermore.

we are adults, and it's our responsibility
to make sure that our children can see
that they're living in a democracy.

we must take away their fears that
are locked up inside.
when they see a stranger they
must run and hide.

look in their eyes and see their trust
is that asking for too much?

caylee, haleigh are just two.
change the laws is what we
have to do.

predators should not be on the streets
where children play and love to meet.

they should be in jails or asylums
and treated for the sickness within.
children should not have to pay
for their evil thoughts and sins.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Obed Souza 20 July 2009

Post modernity or whatever they call it, have killed children and youths... I name it sin... as a teacher I ´ve seen terrible things parents and adults have being doing to children... Some we can reach out others are lost forever... Nice write.

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I hate mean people and how they could even think about hurting a child's soul it beyond me.. I agree with what Leslie Alexis wrote 100% in you're comments.. But you wrote this well.... Krista

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these evil child predator should be locked up and like the dogs they are, their toilets should be their cups.,

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Sandra Fowler 19 February 2009

Your concern for children is timely. And your compassion for them becomes you. I believe that all good people of faith would agree with you. May your voice be heard. Kind regards, Sandra

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Aldo Kraas 19 February 2009

Yes I totally agree with you. I know the people that had beenabused by pedohiles here in Canada. Some are that and some are alive. If you ask me Do the pedophiles have feelings? I would say no because as soon as they come out of jail they ofend again and they return to jail. Believe me justice is never done. Here in Canada the highest sentence is 25 years

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