Thursday, October 26, 2017

Cigar Comments

Rating: 4.7

Love is burning like a cigar
The smoke is lifting from the hearts
The romantic flame is slowly
consuming and melting the souls
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COMMENTS
Robert Murray Smith 13 May 2018

A great metaphor for love.++10

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Akhtar Jawad 09 May 2018

Fire of love and its pains nicely compared with a burning cigar.

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Binayakumar Mohanty 05 November 2017

Creating a paradise always dreamt for.The poem is able to create itself.Nicely crafted.Thanks for sharing.

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Rini Shibu 06 November 2017

Thank you so much Binaya for your comments Rini

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Dr Dillip K Swain 02 November 2017

Cigar is a fascinating poem Rini..I enjoyed it..! !

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Rini Shibu 02 November 2017

Thanks Dillip, glad that you enjoyed

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Lamar Cole 26 October 2017

Very nice poem. I hope that the cigar is a Cuban one.

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Rini Shibu 27 October 2017

Thanks Lam.. Yes Cuban, Romeo Y Julieta

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Kumarmani Mahakul 26 October 2017

Like cigar love is burning. This is leaving trace of ash around and clouds are floating. Love still is creating paradise. Brilliant poem is composed...10

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Rini Shibu 27 October 2017

Thanks Kumar for your comment Rini

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