Cigar Poem by Rini Shibu

Cigar

Rating: ★4.7


Love is burning like a cigar
The smoke is lifting from the hearts
The romantic flame is slowly
consuming and melting the souls
Leaving no trace of ash around
the smoke rings are floating in the air
As if clouds have descended from heaven
Creating a paradise, always dreamt for

Rini Shibu
Thursday, October 26, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: consume,fire,love
poem poems romantic clouds Leaving
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Kumarmani Mahakul 26 October 2017

Like cigar love is burning. This is leaving trace of ash around and clouds are floating. Love still is creating paradise. Brilliant poem is composed...10

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Rini Shibu 27 October 2017

Thanks Kumar for your comment Rini

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Robert Murray Smith 13 May 2018

A great metaphor for love.++10

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Akhtar Jawad 09 May 2018

Fire of love and its pains nicely compared with a burning cigar.

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Binayakumar Mohanty 05 November 2017

Creating a paradise always dreamt for.The poem is able to create itself.Nicely crafted.Thanks for sharing.

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Rini Shibu 06 November 2017

Thank you so much Binaya for your comments Rini

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Dr Dillip K Swain 02 November 2017

Cigar is a fascinating poem Rini..I enjoyed it..! !

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Rini Shibu 02 November 2017

Thanks Dillip, glad that you enjoyed

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Lamar Cole 26 October 2017

Very nice poem. I hope that the cigar is a Cuban one.

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Rini Shibu 27 October 2017

Thanks Lam.. Yes Cuban, Romeo Y Julieta

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