Cleaning Day Gone Bad.. Poem by Rebecca Navarre

Cleaning Day Gone Bad..

Rating: 5.0


Outside I washed the
sides of the house.
Inside I washed the
walls. Didn't cry at
all. Started to dust,
began to bawl. Sat
down, and said the
hell with it all..

Thursday, March 8, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: cleaning,day,fun,silly,spring
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 28 September 2018

Yes it is a routine work, cleaning and dirt play hide and seek...

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Rebecca Navarre 29 September 2018

Thank you! .. Mohammed, For being so kind and your beautiful replies! .. Your poetry is painted so powerful and moving, that touches hearts with it's beauty! ... Thank you! .. Ever so many blessings! ..

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Susan Williams 11 March 2018

Well, of course you did. What woman isn't bored to tears with housework that is never finished because she lives with her family none of whom does windows! And the dust! ! ! Allergies too! ! We need a hike in pay for hazardous conditions and some more benies! ! . Thank you for the moment of laughter! ! Love your rhyme scheme! ! 10 +++

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Rebecca Navarre 13 March 2018

:) Thank You! ! ! ! Susan, For Bringing Me Giggles And A Smile :) With Such A Kind And Understanding Reply! ! ! ! ! Your Poetry Is Written With Ever Such Heart And Soul! ! ! ! ! With Kindness And Inspiration That Touches Other Hearts So! ! ! ! ! Thank You Again Ever So Much! ! ! ! ! ... Ever So Many Blessings! ! ! ! ! ... And Smiles! ! ! ! ! ... Dear Friend.. :)

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