Theodora (Theo) Onken

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~cold - Poem by Theodora (Theo) Onken

! Lost raindropps in the snow
Covered in ice cold regret
Never-ever to be found
In the chill of Winter-Set
Frozen are the rainbows
Made of colour spectrum lights
Covered up by dancing
Of the blanket white-covered night

Comments about ~cold by Theodora (Theo) Onken

  • (9/4/2007 1:00:00 AM)

    Thank you Marci and Dorothy! Dorothy you are very astute!
    You can read me like a book!
    Love to you both. Both so gifted...
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  • (8/22/2007 2:48:00 PM)

    Frozen are the rainbows, what another great analogy...I'm zeroing in on the poems I've written with same title...This is lovely with it's descriptives.~~marci.xo :) ~~ (Report) Reply

  • Dorothy- A. Holmes (6/26/2007 10:27:00 AM)


    Interesting...they read of winter I read of love and regret...

    Lovely either way!

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  • (6/26/2007 4:54:00 AM)

    Theo, as Andy said, sadly here there is not much difference between summer and winter. But what you described took me back in time to the winters in Canada when I was a kid. Just loved it. Top Marks. Thanks for sharing it my friend.
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  • (6/25/2007 7:50:00 AM)

    What a most beautiful way to describe winter Theodora, sadly there is not much differance here in summer to winter...10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, June 25, 2007

Poem Edited: Wednesday, March 16, 2011

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