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~ Death Of Innocence~

Rating: 4.6
It seems like Light Years ago
That sweet innocence
Like a flower in the bud
Growing in new existance

Fresh and un-flawed
Beauty and angelic substance
In the Garden unmarred
Basking in the sun with no resistance
Where oh where did i go?
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Ritika George 22 October 2018
I loved this piece of yours ma'am and i really invite you to read mine as i would like to learn more from you. thank you. regards, Ritika
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Theodora Onken 07 September 2007
Why thank you Ben, and Ana, and i am sorry Ana, that i amjust now reviewing my stuff. All of the comments are so greatly appreciated. Blessings, Theo
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Ben Gieske 07 September 2007
Amazing how you carry the comparison throughout all the phases even after the flower is picked and until it is thrown into the trash. Wonderful insights.
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Ana-kay Rhoden 02 May 2007
Amazing! I could picture exactly what you meant. Love it! ! !
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Michael Fischer 01 May 2007
Great work...I like the analogy as a flower...very clever! Top marks! -Michael
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Sandra Fowler 15 April 2007
Regret for what once was and can never quite be again. Excellent use of metaphor, Theodora. Kindest regards, Sandra
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