Cold Days Arrive Poem by Subhas Chandra Chakra

Cold Days Arrive

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It's not the cold
That has taken
All the warmth off roads,
And that has filled
Loads of lust over the beds,
It's about being alone,
About you not being around,
About me
Not being able to roam about
the crazy cravings for you
To lie close to you,
To fly with you
through the autumn skies
and your thoughts
not warming me anymore.

May be I have started losing you
or the need for being wih you.
Is it called the cold?
Are these the cold days of life?
Or the cold impacts of life? ?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mahtab Bangalee 28 November 2020

yes, it's cold days now roaming around us; it's ending of creative stamina of life if I lose my hearty best one then it feels also the cold and losing something creative love of life

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 04 December 2020

Thanks dear for the lovely poetic appreciation..it was a great pleasure to read your comment.

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Deluke Muwanigwa 28 November 2020

Lovely metaphor of cold emotions hot and cold. Keep her in the closet.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 04 December 2020

Thanks Deluke for the great inspirational words.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 28 November 2020

A fabulous free verse! Beautifully composed....5 stars

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 04 December 2020

Thank you Sir for devoting your precious time in reading the poem. Thanks for these inspirational words.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra

Subhas Chandra Chakra

Sainkul, Anandapur, Odisha, India
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