Colorful Weathers Poem by Akhtar Jawad

Colorful Weathers

Rating: 5.0


You are beautiful, colorful are your feathers,
But colors of eggs have same heathers,
Just like a common hen.
Being one of aesthetic men,
I'm expecting changes in my inside weathers.

Colorful Weathers
Monday, June 18, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: beauty
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Robert Murray Smith 18 June 2018

What a beautiful hen and poem.++10

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 18 June 2018

A fascinating poem with a captivating picture of a hen. Enjoyed reading it. Well penned.1

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Bharati Nayak 21 June 2018

Though the egg looks so ordinary it has the wonderful colors hidden inside - - - A beautiful poem about the talents of a person that may not be apparent to others.The poet aspires to be bestowed with inner beauty that can transform to pure joy.

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Khalida Bano Ali 19 June 2018

Difference lies in appearence, inside it's all the same.

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Kelly Kurt 19 June 2018

Beauty is in the eye of the beholder.

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Kostas Lagos 19 June 2018

You wrote this inspired by a hen? Man, you are really good!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 18 June 2018

The marking should be 10+++++.

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