Tuesday, October 6, 2020

Colourful Months Comments

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Autumn dances by undressing leaves
As they fall to the ground to kiss
This season will forget once again
The lingering September's bliss
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Poetic Sky 29 April 2021

The taste of sweetie chill Will come from October's mill WOW

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Zuzu Mutairi 07 October 2020

Grand four months nicely decorated in words.

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Soran M. H 07 October 2020

It is a text of high poetic value, considered one of the strongest and most beautiful descriptions of autumn

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Sharad Bhatia 07 October 2020

Amen Thankyou for sharing such a beautiful and heart touching poem about colourful months. 100000 ++

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Suresh Kumar Ek 07 October 2020

Magic of seasons Poetically painted Nice work, Asimji

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Kumarmani Mahakul 06 October 2020

Undressing the leaves autumn has started singing with beauty of nature. New season's arrival is witnessed very well. Grace of December will ferry trees. An amazing and brilliant poem is well penned.

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Michael Jack 06 October 2020

Classy The firewood will burn the nights The early morning will struggle with lights The long fallen fog will cover

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Juhaina Tumlu 06 October 2020

The taste of sweetie chill Will come from October's mill The rain-filled earth will revivify Your lost love and touch...5

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Deepak S S 06 October 2020

Last four months of years are really fantastic.

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Anjandev Roy 06 October 2020

With the shiny falling dew drops......fantastic....thank u.....anjandev roy.

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M. Asim Nehal

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