Come Close Poem by Xelam Kan™

Come Close



Come close,
and look into my eyes
Scan my soul and soothe
my fear and cries.
How could I savour a life`s boon,
As been fooled
like Delilah's groom.So
lured my fancies and verses undone,
like Samson, in the temple of Dagon.

Wrinkled, wane and wailing
Desolate, distress and have been ailing,
Dream of days;
spent with you,
when sorrows hewed and joys grew,
with the rising sun till the evening dew,
wandering far hand in hand and
never adieu.
Ah! Soon my soul is ceased to be
Wish thy mercy
have on me.

Friday, March 8, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: dreaming,past
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note: this poem was deleted from my page, again posted
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Titi Dale 08 March 2013

This is great! Nice rhyming and rhythm here: D

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Poetheart Morgan 08 March 2013

You need mercy - but - with or without love? - You search be patient - and found something - wandering from your hands. -

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Bri Edwards 04 June 2016

Women are TROUBLE, plain and simple! ! ! ! Men are MORE trouble ......or so my love told me. :)) bri

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Tajudeen Shah 26 October 2013

Ah, I look at your versification a little bit more closer. Without a spec, but more specifically. Must write a few humble words of content and wonder, when i am, inshaAllah, back from meeting a friend, who demands my presence to discuss the release of his latest movie in November. wait for details, rgds.

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Farah Ilyas 23 June 2013

what a touchy poem Gulsher u have composed, very appealing..Wish thy mercy have on me....begging for love, longing for mercy: '(

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Heather Wilkins 22 June 2013

a nice write. the first stanza is lovely. enjoyed the read

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Yasmin Khan 07 April 2013

It is a somber, serene cry of a heart waning for love...sweet symphony alliteration... weird, wane and wailing is beautiful

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