Come Closer Poem by Lawrence S. Pertillar

Come Closer

Rating: 5.0


Are you an illusion of my delusion?
I seem to feel you from another time!
I seem to have had you in my mind.
And here you appear as clear to me.
Leaving me to wonder if this could be...
What I sought I could not touch in my dreams!
Is this real?
Is this reality?
When you look at 'me'
Do I appear to you as you appear to me?
Are you an illusion of my delusion?
Come closer...
Make me believe!

Friday, September 29, 2006
Topic(s) of this poem: leaving
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Francesca Johnson 29 September 2006

One of your recent bests, Lawrence. Real or a delusion? It leaves the reader to wonder which one, too..... Love, Fran xx

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Brian Dorn 29 September 2006

'Are you an illusion of my delusion? ' Awesome line, Lawrence, and a great poem! Brian

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Tiyler Durden 29 September 2006

ANOTHER great poem frm the master! ! Keep going man your on a roll,10 for tiyler

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Diane Violet 29 September 2006

Good question, I hope you get the answer you want. All the best, Diane

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