Coming Back To Be Present Poem by Aniruddha Pathak

Coming Back To Be Present

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Ceases when the thunder storm,
The trees when regain their calm,
It's taking care to come home,
A moment of inner calm,
And care-free O to linger
Back as if from cliff-hanger,
Life's precious moments so spent,
To come back to be present!
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Wakei-seijyaku is a Japanese philosophy for a moment or two of tranquillity. The concept is the sum of its four components or individual characters: harmony (wa) , respect (kei) , purity (sei) , and tranquillity (jyaku) .
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Reflections | 15.01.2020 |
Topic: peace, tranquillity

Tuesday, January 21, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: peace
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mahtab Bangalee 22 January 2020

Life's precious moments so spent, To come back to be present! // beautiful feelings and expression of life

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Aniruddha Pathak 23 January 2020

Thanks dear MB for the uplifting comments

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Kumarmani Mahakul 21 January 2020

Moment of inner calmness motivates mind and this encourages life with great vision. An interesting sharing is done.

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Aniruddha Pathak 21 January 2020

Lovely observation dear KM, thank you so much.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 21 January 2020

This poem is masterfully composed👌😊....10++

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Aniruddha Pathak 21 January 2020

Grateful indeed for your feedback

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