Communion With Flowers Poem by Mamta Agarwal

Communion With Flowers

Rating: 5.0


A bunch of fresh flowers,
Have the divine power
To lift your mood,
As only prayer could.

As you lie in silent despair
In pain, alone, unable to share,
Friends and relatives come
And ask you what you have done
To yourself, to lie prostrate
And try to commiserate.

You dare not take off your mask
And pretend you are fine when they ask,
For they get uneasy if you reveal
The pain is too much to bear and deal.
Hence I feel,
I can help myself heal,
If I talk to the sublime flowers
For they have the divine power.
And are silent witness in that hour
When I am feeling low and dour.

They don’t judge you in your weak moment,
When you spirit is in torment
Lord, you have endowed them with such virtues
That they come to our rescue
With their playful smile without any guile.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Raj Nandy 04 July 2008

Yes Mamta I am in full agrement! when I had visited that Enchanted Forest in the Muflong valley of Shillong, and saw that rare orchid on the trunk of a tree, - it made me feel that it is a symbol of GOD'S lofty thought! I have written a poem about it also! Your flowers evoke the same sentiments within me! - Raj Nandy

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Howard Johnson 01 July 2008

Beautiful imagery and concept, Easily gave it a 10, thank you for sharing

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Catherine Rica Cosico 01 July 2008

Great poem, mamta, it's so beautiful.............. Cate

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Rebekah Gamble 01 July 2008

It's interesting that you have linked personification and metaphor so beautifully. Well done!

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