Complicatedly Simple Poem by Dr Kamran Haider Bukhari

Complicatedly Simple

Rating: 5.0


Today
Words can explain me
I am no more complicated now
But
I am still confused
My eyes are focusing
On a red light
Emerging through
Your blue eyes
Or
Through infinity
I know
I can’t reach You
But I’ll follow You
Wherever You go
I’ll be crawling
Behind You
Sniffing the dust
Of Your red feet
It’s a problematic
Mathematical equation
Which is impossible to solve
Or
To stand with an equilibrium
On the rope of Life and Death
But
I made it
Someone held my hand
And I crossed all the way
Through the rope of Life and Death

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
H. Chesebit 25 November 2007

Nice work. Thanks for a good read.

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Blue Horizon 22 October 2008

u've titled it aptly justly and thoroughly as 'complecatedly simple' it's a very strong and catchy poem and i really like it

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Philippa Lane 18 October 2008

This is a powerful poem. I believe you reached a state of equanimity - like an oasis in a desert. Your poem proves that many states of mind are transient, if only we can remember that. Keep writing, please.

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Sathyanarayana M V S 15 October 2008

Deep & profound..........stunning piece...10

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Ashraful Musaddeq 12 October 2008

'It’s a problematic Mathematical equation Which is impossible to solve Or To stand with equilibrium On the rope of Life and Death.' Wonderful Syed. Beautiful imagery. Love it and added 10.

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Richa Dhodi 07 October 2008

Good work. I like the theme.

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