Constipated Hostler And The Homebred Woman Poem by nimal dunuhinga

Constipated Hostler And The Homebred Woman

Rating: 5.0


Sometimes he sleeps in the stable
And wakes up to gadflies' hubbub.
Scarcely a woman waits for him
At the Pub to secure his wallet.
He neighs like a horse after two gulps of cheap liquor
And she plucks the gray hair from his beehive like beard.
After sometimes both of them groan
And the Platonic love continues till the rickety stable closed.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Romeo Della Valle 10 January 2010

Beautiful metaphor! You got the message across, brother, well penned, keep up! Proud of you, you got my vote,10+++

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Sandra Fowler 10 January 2010

Unusual metaphors. Interesting write. You are so prolific. I salute you for that. Kind wishes, Sandra

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kalubovila East, Sri Lanka
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