Cosmic Speculations Poem by Etienne Charilaou

Cosmic Speculations

Rating: 5.0


A flickering in the corner of my eye:
A twirling, wind-buffeted shadow of a small dry leaf
Caught in a strand of a spider's old webbing.

I, a willing prisoner indoor
Where the air is arguably staler.
Beyond this cramped, dust-laden space
In my mind's eye I see more:
The universe tremendous - colder;
Speckled infinitely with star islands,
And Worlds innumerable…and life?
And intelligence? Like us; not like us?

Sunday, May 31, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: galaxy,life,stars,cosmology,dust
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
an attempt at wabi-sabi (wabi-sabi: finding beauty in the imperfect, incomplete and impermanent)
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kostas Lagos 31 May 2020

A noetic journey to the universe...excellent!

0 0 Reply
Mahtab Bangalee 31 May 2020

well penned..... thought provoking....

0 0 Reply
Yoonoos Peerbocus 31 May 2020

worlds innumerable....significant piece

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success