Sanjukta Nag

Gold Star - 21,168 Points (05-07-1992 / India)

Cracks Of Love - Poem by Sanjukta Nag

The darkest wind of winter
Combs the leafy bodies of pine trees.
Their green edges of sharpness,
Shiver like the tattered page
Of a lost love poem,
That once slipped from a lover’s rusty lips.
Chill is blooming silently like a thief,
While the temple of heart
Is burning with an unceasing fire
For worshiping a Demigod named love,
Who was defeated miserably
In an egoistic battle between two minds.
Now living the powerless life
Of a flawed human being.

Topic(s) of this poem: life, love and art, sadness

Form: Free Verse


Comments about Cracks Of Love by Sanjukta Nag

  • Edward Kofi Louis (2/7/2016 5:20:00 AM)


    Love! Between two minds. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

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  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (11/8/2015 8:14:00 AM)


    Heartfelt poem, wisely written, I liked it,10+++
    In an egoistic battle between two minds.
    Now living the powerless life
    Of a flawed human being.
    (Report) Reply

  • Shakil Ahmed (11/8/2015 2:52:00 AM)


    you have painted your emotion like a flow of fountain, well ccmposed poem, these lines are very beautiful-While the temple of heart
    Is burning with an unceasing fire
    For worshiping a Demigod named love,
    (Report) Reply

  • Vishal Sharma (11/8/2015 2:07:00 AM)


    nicely written seems like u nurtured ur poetry like ur sibling (Report) Reply

  • (11/8/2015 1:37:00 AM)


    in winter love is lost how sad
    in spring it will rejuvenate you'll be glad
    thanks-10
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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (11/8/2015 1:10:00 AM)


    Leafy body of pine tree is comb by darkest wind of winter. This is very nice humor and wisely paints the lines in amazing words. In an egoistic battle between two minds, now living the powerless life. Wonderfully expressed the end too. Interesting and fantastic...10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, November 8, 2015



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