Craving Poem by Manonton Dalan

Craving



Lightning splits the sky
So much anger; so much power
Rolled into deafening thunder
Scared innocent baby cry

Muffled by the pouring rain
Washing away my footprints
Flow like a muddy river
Grounding flying feather

Beneath the tree, seek shelter
Tomorrow to wander
Looking for tiny ground dweller
To satisfy a craving, hunger

While I'm sitting here
Wondering what to write later

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
*Trusting You* 07 December 2008

you put the images in there with such mastery that it plays in the readers mind like a movie. good job. a very enjoyable piece to read. Becca

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Saint Cynosure 25 October 2008

very good excellent piece...

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Manonton Dalan

Manonton Dalan

virginia, usa
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