Rating: 5.0
A Little bit and give me more
More and more, a little more
more of your love, makes me whole
Whole of your love kills my soul
Never again I should ask to pour
Give me now till I choke
It will be cool from the core
Just like a drink of coke
A little bit more or nothing at all
I am hungry to take more
Everyday more and more
Sunday, October 29, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: crazy,love
Robert Murray Smith 20 July 2018
Crazy in love. With more development it could make the charts as a hit song. Have a go.+++10
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Akhtar Jawad 15 April 2018
To be crazy in love is a beauty and a beauty is a joy for ever.
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Rini Shibu 15 April 2018
Thank you so much Akhtarji for your lovely comment..! !
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Dr Dillip K Swain 25 December 2017
A delightful little poem Rini Lovely expression...10
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Houda Boukassoula 22 December 2017
Such a crazy love actually: Give me now till I choke love is the only feeling that choking with remains sweet Houda Boukassoula
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Rini Shibu 23 December 2017
Thanks for posting your feedback Houda
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Bit by bit More and more, till there's no more 10 out of 10 wonderful poem about the temptation of love Rini Thank you for sharing Mario Odekerken
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Rini Shibu 30 October 2017
Thanks Mario, I'm pleased that you liked it
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Daniel Brick 30 October 2017
This is a crazy love because it sets no limits on the expression of love. Each gesture of affection from the beloved stimulates a further need for such displays. It is an exhausting affair of the heart. But I still applaud it. True love is such a special gift, why should it not demand that we live every moment in loving awareness of its blessings. This is the UNCONDITIONAL LOVE of one of your other poems.
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Rini Shibu 30 October 2017
Thank you so much Daniel your comments mean a lot to me Rini
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Lamar Cole 29 October 2017
This is a very nice and enjoyable poem. More is best.
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Rini Shibu 29 October 2017
Thanks Lam for reading this poem.. Rini
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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 October 2017
Oh! What a wonferful poem it is. More and more, a little more of love... wonderful imaginary. Thanks for sharing.
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Rini Shibu 29 October 2017
Thanks Kumar for visiting this poem Rini
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Edward Kofi Louis 29 October 2017
More of your love! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
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Rini Shibu 29 October 2017
Thanks Edward for your comments..
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