Create Your Life Poem by v.m.saraswathy munuswamy

Create Your Life

Rating: 5.0


Time is too short
To shape my thoughts
Into heart throb words
To complete my walk
In the endless woods
To learn all the
Secrets of the universe
To feel good within,
i learnt
To create my life.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
create what you want
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unnikrishnan E S 20 May 2016

Hi Saraswathy, This poem too, like others by you, exudes positive energy and prompts positive thinking in the reader. Very beautifully worded poem. Keep writing and sharing. Thanks.

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mostly my mind reflects my mood sometimes it could be nostalgic, brooding, but mostly i try to bring the positivity in all my works, thanks dear poet for your deep insight of my works and valuable comments

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Kumarmani Mahakul 19 May 2016

Thoughts are unlimited but to shape every thought time is definitely very short. But we need to manage life and time in this short appearance. Creating life to feel good within is definitely interesting. Nice drafting is shared on....10

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Edward Kofi Louis 14 May 2016

To create my life! ! Thanks for sharing.

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Too short to shape my thoughts.Nice work.

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Thanks for the review and appreciation, welcome

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