Crepuscular Poem by Kim Barney

Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit

Crepuscular

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Calamitous is how it would appear
Apprehensive am I but have not fear
This life I've lived has not been without pain
And now I think I've little left to gain
Rheumatism has tried to knock me down
Arthritis is no joy to have around
Charley horses really bother me
This is much worse, as you can plainly see
Should I go blind, will you read to me?

Crepuscular
Tuesday, May 19, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: body,health,life,sickness
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
written 19 May 2015
Recife, Brazil

two words and title changed 27 August 2015
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Spock The Vegan 24 May 2015

Hang in there! The picture must be mountains, but with the Milky Way it looks like a Hubble Telecope image of a place where stars are born. Good job.

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Kim Barney 26 May 2015

The picture was taken at night in Arches National Park in Utah. Thanks for your comment.

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