Crisis Of Humanity Poem by Aftab Alam

Crisis Of Humanity

Rating: 5.0


Awake, awake O Bravo where you slept?
our Home burning, many a times we wept
When darkness becomes bright, humanity left
Ah! Doom of the day we accepted and kept

Save save innocent must be saved
Tears, Cries and blood what we have paved
Shame shame our feeling has been lost
Deaf, dumb and blind, we are paying the cost

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Wahab Abdul 27 May 2013

this is yrs wonderful poem, short, crisp, very meaning full, and clear and clean poetry, love it...10

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Yasmin Khan 28 May 2013

It's the plight of whole humanity....a powerful message conveyed with force, an awakening call

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Ruby Mostazir 10 June 2013

forgot to vote....10 obviously!

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Ruby Mostazir 09 June 2013

short but nice & so meaningful....love this rhymes. our world is really in crisis n it makes me sad very often

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We are facing the Siberian chilling wind of nepotism and shivering with seal before the ballot!

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Gajanan Mishra 28 May 2013

our feeling has been lost, You are great really Aftab, my brother, I like it.10

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Neela Nath Das 28 May 2013

So nice rhyming couplets conveying wonderful message!

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